Rain issue 1 is complete! It has problems with its presentation. The art is inconsistent, the lettering is very bad, often half-assed. The whole concept is unpublishable. It has basic writing problems. Also, I was more than halfway through it when I realized that, aside from Raika, I had LITERALLY depicted the female characters as virgins and whores. Ironic high-five!
As I read through it, the ideas I was trying to get across appear to be there and intact, if not always skillfully presented. And it’s done. Residue is next! …Once I figure out if I’m ready to commit to drawing on something larger than typing paper.